Proposal Feedback

I got two students in the class to read my proposal and pick out good and bad points of my proposal i wanted to record them to use a wider range of media and i also wanted to hear they're opinions word for word. i think this benifted me as i could change the bad parts of my propsoal and knew not to use/do them again and carried on using my good points as a strong part for all my media work. using this for other parts of my blogger.

Speaker 1 - Gemma Malcolm
Speaker 2 - David Campbell